I like the logo with its connection to each other in terms of the text. It is very metaphorical on touching. I would like to see the logo scooted a little over but not directly over the center of the shirt.
The blue on the white shirt looks great even with the black out line on the shirt. the position is fun which with be attracted to the younger age group. The text is much better . I like the way the i connects safe and sexy.
I don't think the stem of the "a" in "safe" needs to be connected to the "i" in "is". that being said, this design promotes the theme perfectly. sure, we can find a message on someone's t-shirt front, warning us not to fuck bare, but I think the genitals are the key players in this type of counsel, and your design directly invokes them.
I like the logo with its connection to each other in terms of the text. It is very metaphorical on touching. I would like to see the logo scooted a little over but not directly over the center of the shirt.
ReplyDeleteThe blue on the white shirt looks great even with the black out line on the shirt. the position is fun which with be attracted to the younger age group. The text is much better . I like the way the i connects safe and sexy.
ReplyDeleteI don't think the stem of the "a" in "safe" needs to be connected to the "i" in "is". that being said, this design promotes the theme perfectly. sure, we can find a message on someone's t-shirt front, warning us not to fuck bare, but I think the genitals are the key players in this type of counsel, and your design directly invokes them.
ReplyDeleteI agree with tommy about the positioning of the bubble, a bit more towards the center though not dead center would be best.
ReplyDeleteAs far as the black outline I think that should be ignored in favor of the actual logo, as that is what's being judged.